So, what I did was to provide a Wrap Up message to follow either the campaign Victory or Defeat messages. It's just a historical bit of facts about how the war ended, and it's applicable to whether the player won or lost the campaign:
So, Cool, if you will, the sentences that I would like your judgment on are in the Victory and Defeat messages. These are supposedly Finnish proverbs; they came from a web site of such which looks like it was prepared by a native Finnish speaker from the slight errors in English translations that I could detect. Here they are:
Joka kehhuin sottaan lähtöö, ei se sieltä takasin tule (Who goes boasting to war will not return from it).
Sota ei päätä kuka on oikeassa, vain sen että kuka on jäljellä (War does not determine who is right, only who remains).
If you can improve on them, I would appreciate your help. Keep in mind that space is limited and that the message box may move a long word to the next line of the message box, leaving an unsightly gap and truncating the end of the message. If these are merely okay with you, that's good enough for me (and the rest of us). If it's one of those "God is cold" situations (I also hope He is not), though, your suggestions will be welcome.




