Final Release Candidate - Library errata

mllange · Post by **mllange** » Sun Jul 03, 2011 4:45 pm

- Movement tables page: spelling error - 'effecting' should be 'affecting';
- Equipment (Matilda) - 'classed' - should this be 'classified'?

Kerensky · Post by **Kerensky** » Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:35 pm

Not necessarily. 'Classed' does fit in the sentence structure you see in the library. Albeit a little awkwardly.

mllange · Post by **mllange** » Mon Jul 04, 2011 2:01 am

I won't argue the point, it is certainly a case of no harm, no foul. Indeed, there are several places where the sentence structure is a bit awkward in the library, but I'm not being critical. All in all, it is a solid effort!

TJD · Post by **TJD** » Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:01 am

mllange wrote:I won't argue the point, it is certainly a case of no harm, no foul. Indeed, there are several places where the sentence structure is a bit awkward in the library, but I'm not being critical. All in all, it is a solid effort!

Well, thanks for that. I wrote all the entries in the tank library and any errors are solely mine. I'd suggest you turn your critical eye to the manual, which needs a great deal of work. Slith handled the proofing and obviously would have been better served by seeking help here. The game overall is so nicely polished it's a particular shame that they fell down on the manual, which could have been cleaned up quite easily, comparatively speaking.

Tim