Etna Line NorthA.pzbrf
July 29th, 1943
The battle for Sicily does not go in our favor, Herr General. Every day we are forced back, with no end in sight to seemingly unlimited enemy reinforcements pouring onto the island. High Command is still debating whether or not holding on to Sicily is worth the struggle, and we need you to buy us time to either muster up reinforcements or to lay out evacuation plans.
Your objective is hold the line by limiting the Allied control victory hexes as much as possible. Decisive victory here can only be accomplished by a counter-attack, but be cautious not to over-extend your forces.
Any Italian units you have preserved will be ready to deploy to bolster your forces, just remember that if you wish to continue to use these units in future missions, they must once again be escorted to Evacuation Hexes before the end of this operation.
Special note: Italian AUXILIARY units that are successfully escorted off map WILL be available for deployment in future scenarios!
-> Some words were missing and I slightly rephrased to: Your objective is to hold the line by preventing the Allied control of victory hexes as much as possible.
Etna Line NorthB_decisive.pzbrf
Quite the formidable defense you managed to put up, Herr General. The Allied advance through Sicily has been stalled significantly, but ultimately your success here has only bought us time. In the face of the enemy's overwhelming air and naval superiority, we have no choice but to evacuate our forces from Sicily. Order your forces back to Messina, Herr General, we must live to fight another day.
-> Quite a formidable
Etna Line NorthC_marginal.pzbrf
A solid defense, Herr General. The Allied advance through Sicily has been stalled somewhat, but ultimately your success here has only bought us time. In the face of the enemy's overwhelming air and naval superiority, we have no choice but to evacuate our forces from Sicily. Order your forces back to Messina, Herr General, we must live to fight another day.
OK
Etna Line NorthD_loss.pzbrf
Although your forces suffered a serious setback in this battle, our situation is not completely hopeless just yet. I'm ordering your forces to fall back to our next defensive line [/u]and re-organize[/u] themselves there. Whatever resources we can spare will be sent to rebuild your units, but be warned that continued failure may result in an unrecoverable defeat!
-> yet
-> maybe "and to re-organize" (note: it's always spelled re-organize in the briefings, not sure if it is not rather reorganize without -)
Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
Moderators: Slitherine Core, The Lordz, Panzer Corps Moderators, Panzer Corps Design
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
Etna Line SouthA.pzbrf
July 29th, 1943
The battle for Sicily does not go in our favor, Herr General. Every day we are forced back, with no end in sight to seemingly unlimited enemy reinforcements pouring onto the island. High Command is still debating whether or not holding on to Sicily is worth the struggle, and we need you to buy us time to either muster up reinforcements or to lay out evacuation plans.
Your objective is hold the line by limiting the Allied control victory hexes as much as possible. Decisive victory here can only be accomplished by a counter-attack, but be cautious not to over-extend your forces.
Any Italian units you have preserved will be ready to deploy to bolster your forces, just remember that if you wish to continue to use these units in future missions, they must once again be escorted to Evacuation Hexes before the end of this operation.
Special note: Italian AUXILIARY units that are successfully escorted off map WILL be available for deployment in future scenarios!
-> Some words were missing and I slightly rephrased to: Your objective is to hold the line by preventing the Allied control of victory hexes as much as possible.
Etna Line SouthB_decisive.pzbrf
Quite the formidable defense you managed to put up, Herr General. The Allied advance through Sicily has been stalled significantly, but ultimately your success here has only bought us time. In the face of the enemy's overwhelming air and naval superiority, we have no choice but to evacuate our forces from Sicily. Order your forces back to Messina, Herr General, we must live to fight another day.
-> Quite a formidable
Etna Line SouthC_marginal -> OK
Etna Line SouthD_loss.pzbrf
Although your forces suffered a serious setback in this battle, our situation is not completely hopeless just yet. I'm ordering your forces to fall back to our next defensive line and re-organize themselves there. Whatever resources we can spare will be sent to rebuild your units, but be warned that continued failure may result in an unrecoverable defeat!
-> yet
-> maybe "and to re-organize" (note: it's always spelled re-organize in the briefings, not sure if it is not rather reorganize without -)
July 29th, 1943
The battle for Sicily does not go in our favor, Herr General. Every day we are forced back, with no end in sight to seemingly unlimited enemy reinforcements pouring onto the island. High Command is still debating whether or not holding on to Sicily is worth the struggle, and we need you to buy us time to either muster up reinforcements or to lay out evacuation plans.
Your objective is hold the line by limiting the Allied control victory hexes as much as possible. Decisive victory here can only be accomplished by a counter-attack, but be cautious not to over-extend your forces.
Any Italian units you have preserved will be ready to deploy to bolster your forces, just remember that if you wish to continue to use these units in future missions, they must once again be escorted to Evacuation Hexes before the end of this operation.
Special note: Italian AUXILIARY units that are successfully escorted off map WILL be available for deployment in future scenarios!
-> Some words were missing and I slightly rephrased to: Your objective is to hold the line by preventing the Allied control of victory hexes as much as possible.
Etna Line SouthB_decisive.pzbrf
Quite the formidable defense you managed to put up, Herr General. The Allied advance through Sicily has been stalled significantly, but ultimately your success here has only bought us time. In the face of the enemy's overwhelming air and naval superiority, we have no choice but to evacuate our forces from Sicily. Order your forces back to Messina, Herr General, we must live to fight another day.
-> Quite a formidable
Etna Line SouthC_marginal -> OK
Etna Line SouthD_loss.pzbrf
Although your forces suffered a serious setback in this battle, our situation is not completely hopeless just yet. I'm ordering your forces to fall back to our next defensive line and re-organize themselves there. Whatever resources we can spare will be sent to rebuild your units, but be warned that continued failure may result in an unrecoverable defeat!
-> yet
-> maybe "and to re-organize" (note: it's always spelled re-organize in the briefings, not sure if it is not rather reorganize without -)
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
GirondeA.pzbrf
December 7th, 1942
It seems our enemies are back to their old tricks again, Herr General. Another commando style raid has been spotted enroute to Bordeaux with the clear intent of sabotaging the port facilities. Reports indicate that they have secured territory on both sides of the Gironde estuary, so you will have to divide your forces to combat both enemy formations.
Your objective is to securing all Victory Hex objectives and to protect all Cargo Ships docked at Bordeaux.
One additional piece of intelligence you should be aware of, Herr General. With no Allied carrier support, it is impossible for Allied aircraft to reach this part of France. You should expect no resistance from any enemy aircraft, but be on guard against a fairly well equipped landing party. As always, be extra cautious of any tricks those commandos may have up their sleeve!
OK
GirondeB_decisive.pzbrf
Another spectacular performance, Herr General! Once again you have successfully blunted a dishonorable and cowardly raid and protected precious materials and facilities from harm. In light of your continued success, and the changing fortunes of the war, High Command wants to reassign you to the next critical hot spot that will inevitably flare up.
Based on the news from Afrika and the defeat of the Afrika Korps at El Alamein last month, my guess is that your next deployment will take you to the Mediterranean. Perhaps now would be a good time to brush up on your Italian!
Historically, Operation Frankton succeeded in destroying or damaging six ships docked at the port of Bordeaux, with little loss of life on either side.
OK except see below:
GirondeC_marginal.pzbrf
I see a few of those commandos managed to cause some damage, Herr General. In the end, however, the destruction at Bordeaux was light, and this cowardly raid has been utterly repulsed. In light of your continued success, and the changing fortunes of the war, High Command wants to reassign you to the next critical hot spot that will inevitably flare up.
Based on the news from Afrika and the defeat of the Afrika Korps at El Alamein last month, my guess is that your next deployment will take you to the Mediterranean. Perhaps now would be a good time to brush up on your Italian!
Historically, Operation Frankton succeeded in destroying or damaging six ships docked at the port of Bordeaux, with little loss of life on either side.
-> not sure, is it not "in the light"?
GirondeD_loss.pzbrf
It seems that the Allied commandos got the best of you this time! Fear not though, the damage they inflicted is hardly devastating, and I'm certain there will be more opportunities in the future for you to seek your revenge against them!
OK
December 7th, 1942
It seems our enemies are back to their old tricks again, Herr General. Another commando style raid has been spotted enroute to Bordeaux with the clear intent of sabotaging the port facilities. Reports indicate that they have secured territory on both sides of the Gironde estuary, so you will have to divide your forces to combat both enemy formations.
Your objective is to securing all Victory Hex objectives and to protect all Cargo Ships docked at Bordeaux.
One additional piece of intelligence you should be aware of, Herr General. With no Allied carrier support, it is impossible for Allied aircraft to reach this part of France. You should expect no resistance from any enemy aircraft, but be on guard against a fairly well equipped landing party. As always, be extra cautious of any tricks those commandos may have up their sleeve!
OK
GirondeB_decisive.pzbrf
Another spectacular performance, Herr General! Once again you have successfully blunted a dishonorable and cowardly raid and protected precious materials and facilities from harm. In light of your continued success, and the changing fortunes of the war, High Command wants to reassign you to the next critical hot spot that will inevitably flare up.
Based on the news from Afrika and the defeat of the Afrika Korps at El Alamein last month, my guess is that your next deployment will take you to the Mediterranean. Perhaps now would be a good time to brush up on your Italian!
Historically, Operation Frankton succeeded in destroying or damaging six ships docked at the port of Bordeaux, with little loss of life on either side.
OK except see below:
GirondeC_marginal.pzbrf
I see a few of those commandos managed to cause some damage, Herr General. In the end, however, the destruction at Bordeaux was light, and this cowardly raid has been utterly repulsed. In light of your continued success, and the changing fortunes of the war, High Command wants to reassign you to the next critical hot spot that will inevitably flare up.
Based on the news from Afrika and the defeat of the Afrika Korps at El Alamein last month, my guess is that your next deployment will take you to the Mediterranean. Perhaps now would be a good time to brush up on your Italian!
Historically, Operation Frankton succeeded in destroying or damaging six ships docked at the port of Bordeaux, with little loss of life on either side.
-> not sure, is it not "in the light"?
GirondeD_loss.pzbrf
It seems that the Allied commandos got the best of you this time! Fear not though, the damage they inflicted is hardly devastating, and I'm certain there will be more opportunities in the future for you to seek your revenge against them!
OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
All issues above this post should be corrected. Thanks for your help, keep it coming! 
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
You're welcome, although, as is my duty as beta-tester for this wonderful game, I must regrettably inform you of several still uncorrected misstakes I posted in the beginningKerensky wrote:All issues above this post should be corrected. Thanks for your help, keep it coming!
. But, to be honest, I found a couple I had missed 
. I'll just post the original with (what in my opinion are) errors underlined (sometimes with comments in Italic) and the complete, corrected version afterwards, like Longasc did, which may make comparison easier. Maybe it would be a good idea if we post all proposals in some sort of standardized format?St NazaireA.pzbrf
Original:
March 28th, 1942
Congratulations on your new command, Herr General. I am certain that you will perform your duties and lead your men with the utmost ability. As your Generalfeldmarschall, I will keep you informed of your objectives and share intelligence with you as it becomes available during these briefings. (Might be confusing to non-native speakers, being interpreted as new info becoming available during briefings) Speaking of which, shall we begin your briefing now?
I must say, I was somewhat confused by your transfer orders, but if you truly have arrived here from the Eastern Front, I'm certain that your hand picked veterans will serve you well. If you began this campaign with a force imported from Grand Campaign '41, you will only be able to import 8 of these units AND your prestige will be reset. The remaining units are considered to have stayed (stayed behind) on the Eastern Front.
Now then, as the war in the East and Afrika continues, not all has been quiet here in the West. In the past, numerous probing attacks from British commandos (British Commandos or Allied commandos?) have caused some irritating damage. While this is of no great concern, it is obvious that these attacks will only continue to grow in size and scope, and so they must be addressed! This is where you come in.
As the commanding officer of our secret task force, it falls upon you to respond to and eliminate the threat posed by these commando raids. As the war continuing on other fronts is already placing heavy demand on Germany's industry, however, the supply of equipment you may receive may... be of second hand (Not wrong, but I propose second-rate or second class)nature. Even so, you must strive to do your best with the cards you've been dealt!
Your first task is to defend the French port of St. Nazaire. Double agents have leaked intelligence pointing to a major enemy operation aimed at St. Nazaire, and we need you to stop it. Your objective is (briefing mentions two objectives) to protect the Normandie Dock and all docked U-boats within the harbor.
Good luck, Herr General. I trust you will fulfill your duty brilliantly!
Note: SE Unit limit for this campaign is 4. Experience limit is set at 425.
Corrected text:
March 28th, 1942
Congratulations on your new command, Herr General. I am certain that you will perform your duties and lead your men to the utmost of your ability. As your Generalfeldmarschall, I will keep you informed of your objectives and share intelligence with you through these briefings as it becomes available. Speaking of which, shall we begin your briefing now?
I must say, I was somewhat confused by your transfer orders, but if you truly have arrived here from the Eastern Front, I'm certain that your hand picked veterans will serve you well. If you began this campaign with a force imported from Grand Campaign '41, you will only be able to import 8 of these units AND your prestige will be reset. The remaining units are considered to have stayed behind on the Eastern Front.
Now then, as the war in the East and Afrika continues, not all has been quiet here in the West. In the past, numerous probing attacks from Allied commandos have caused some irritating damage. While this is of no great concern, it is obvious that these attacks will only continue to grow in size and scope, and so they must be addressed! This is where you come in.
As the commanding officer of our secret task force, it falls upon you to respond to and eliminate the threat posed by these commando raids. As the ongoing war on other fronts is already placing heavy demand on Germany's industry, however, the supply of equipment you may receive may... be of second class nature. Even so, you must strive to do your best with the cards you've been dealt!
Your first task is to defend the French port of St. Nazaire. Double agents have leaked intelligence pointing to a major enemy operation aimed at St. Nazaire, and we need you to stop it. Your objectives are to protect the Normandie Dock and all docked U-boats within the harbor.
Good luck, Herr General. I trust you will fulfill your duty brilliantly!
Note: SE Unit limit for this campaign is 4. Experience limit is set at 425.
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
St NazaireB_decisive.pzbrf The names of all the briefings files are correct this time, but the contents are unchanged?
Original:
High Command sends its congratulations on a job well done! You have certainly proven to be the right General for this job, vindicating both the need for this special task force and your position as its leader. We must remain vigilant, however, as I'm certain we have not seen the last of the Allied commando raids.
Historically, Operation Chariot succeeded in disabling the Normandie Dock until the end of the war, but came at a high cost with only a third of the raiders returning to England (England is a part of Great Britain, like Wales, that's why those special units are called the British Commandos).
Corrected:
High Command sends its congratulations on a job well done! You have certainly proven to be the right General for this job, vindicating both the need for this special task force and your position as its leader. We must remain vigilant, however, as I'm certain we have not seen the last of the Allied commando raids.
Historically, Operation Chariot succeeded in disabling the Normandie Dock until the end of the war, but came at a high cost with only a third of the raiders returning to Great Britain.
St NazaireC_marginal.pzbrf
Original:
High Command sends its compliments, Herr General. Although there was some damage done to the facilities at St. Naizare, this only reinforces the need for this new task force and your role as its leader. We must remain vigilant, however, as I'm certain we have not seen the last of the Allied commando raids.
Historically, Operation Chariot succeeded in disabling the Normandie Dock until the end of the war, but came at a high cost with only a third of the raiders returning to England.
Corrected:
High Command sends its compliments, Herr General. Although there was some damage done to the facilities at St. Nazaire, this only reinforces the need for this new task force and your role as its leader. We must remain vigilant, however, as I'm certain we have not seen the last of the Allied commando raids.
Historically, Operation Chariot succeeded in disabling the Normandie Dock until the end of the war, but came at a high cost with only a third of the raiders returning to Great Britain.
St NazaireD_loss.pzbrf
Original:
Your failure to secure the bare minimum requirements for victory here as (has) sealed the fate of our newly formed task force and your career with it! Should we choose to restart this program, another, more capable officer will be selected.
You are dismissed!
Corrected:
Your failure to secure the bare minimum requirements for victory here has sealed the fate of our newly formed task force and your career with it! Should we choose to restart this program, another, more capable officer will be selected.
You are dismissed!
St. Nazaire Scenario Messages: NOTE: there are two pzscn files, one correctly spelled and the other one had the old, incorrect spelling. I read the changelog so I assume the misspelled one is the one I should open in the editor and use to propose corrections.
Message 1:
There are reports of Allied Commandos (capital c only when writing 'British Commandos', as that is the unit's name) already inside St. Nazaire Harbor (no capital, and a harbor is part of a port, the briefing called it a port as well), defend the Normandie Dock!
Corrected:
There are reports of Allied commandos already inside St. Nazaire port, defend the Normandie Dock!
Message 2:
HMS Campbeltown has exploded! There are reports of serious damage to the Normandie Dock gates! (no errors, but for clarity for those not aware of the circumstances of the raid and/or name of the ship:)
Suggested:
The destroyer that rammed the dock, the HMS Campbeltown, has exploded! There are reports of serious damage to the Normandie Dock gates!
Original:
High Command sends its congratulations on a job well done! You have certainly proven to be the right General for this job, vindicating both the need for this special task force and your position as its leader. We must remain vigilant, however, as I'm certain we have not seen the last of the Allied commando raids.
Historically, Operation Chariot succeeded in disabling the Normandie Dock until the end of the war, but came at a high cost with only a third of the raiders returning to England (England is a part of Great Britain, like Wales, that's why those special units are called the British Commandos).
Corrected:
High Command sends its congratulations on a job well done! You have certainly proven to be the right General for this job, vindicating both the need for this special task force and your position as its leader. We must remain vigilant, however, as I'm certain we have not seen the last of the Allied commando raids.
Historically, Operation Chariot succeeded in disabling the Normandie Dock until the end of the war, but came at a high cost with only a third of the raiders returning to Great Britain.
St NazaireC_marginal.pzbrf
Original:
High Command sends its compliments, Herr General. Although there was some damage done to the facilities at St. Naizare, this only reinforces the need for this new task force and your role as its leader. We must remain vigilant, however, as I'm certain we have not seen the last of the Allied commando raids.
Historically, Operation Chariot succeeded in disabling the Normandie Dock until the end of the war, but came at a high cost with only a third of the raiders returning to England.
Corrected:
High Command sends its compliments, Herr General. Although there was some damage done to the facilities at St. Nazaire, this only reinforces the need for this new task force and your role as its leader. We must remain vigilant, however, as I'm certain we have not seen the last of the Allied commando raids.
Historically, Operation Chariot succeeded in disabling the Normandie Dock until the end of the war, but came at a high cost with only a third of the raiders returning to Great Britain.
St NazaireD_loss.pzbrf
Original:
Your failure to secure the bare minimum requirements for victory here as (has) sealed the fate of our newly formed task force and your career with it! Should we choose to restart this program, another, more capable officer will be selected.
You are dismissed!
Corrected:
Your failure to secure the bare minimum requirements for victory here has sealed the fate of our newly formed task force and your career with it! Should we choose to restart this program, another, more capable officer will be selected.
You are dismissed!
St. Nazaire Scenario Messages: NOTE: there are two pzscn files, one correctly spelled and the other one had the old, incorrect spelling. I read the changelog so I assume the misspelled one is the one I should open in the editor and use to propose corrections.
Message 1:
There are reports of Allied Commandos (capital c only when writing 'British Commandos', as that is the unit's name) already inside St. Nazaire Harbor (no capital, and a harbor is part of a port, the briefing called it a port as well), defend the Normandie Dock!
Corrected:
There are reports of Allied commandos already inside St. Nazaire port, defend the Normandie Dock!
Message 2:
HMS Campbeltown has exploded! There are reports of serious damage to the Normandie Dock gates! (no errors, but for clarity for those not aware of the circumstances of the raid and/or name of the ship:)
Suggested:
The destroyer that rammed the dock, the HMS Campbeltown, has exploded! There are reports of serious damage to the Normandie Dock gates!
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
I am installing the DLC8-v2 Beta right now and would like to tell people how they can quickly and efficiently report text errors, without too much work:
1. The Data and Briefing subdirectories contain the files you want to check. You can open them with any text editor, just tell Windows to remember opening the files with your favorite text editor.
2. I use http://notepad-plus-plus.org/ for this, I open all briefings of a particular scenario and get them in a tabbed view.
3. You can use CTRL+F to replace all <p>, </p> and <b> etc. in all opened files with "nothing". This gives you the plain text you want to copy to the forum.
Also try to make only corrections rather than trying to improve the entire briefing. There are not only technical reasons why fully corrected files won't be accepted, there are also legal reasons. The lawyer of my company explained it to me (not related to Panzer Corps, just a similar case), if I would write a scenario briefing and Lordz/Slitherine would take it without a lot of declarations on my part that I give them full rights blabla etc. I could demand funny things like the briefing being removed later or getting paid and so on. Sometimes I really despair about such things...
1. The Data and Briefing subdirectories contain the files you want to check. You can open them with any text editor, just tell Windows to remember opening the files with your favorite text editor.
2. I use http://notepad-plus-plus.org/ for this, I open all briefings of a particular scenario and get them in a tabbed view.
3. You can use CTRL+F to replace all <p>, </p> and <b> etc. in all opened files with "nothing". This gives you the plain text you want to copy to the forum.
Also try to make only corrections rather than trying to improve the entire briefing. There are not only technical reasons why fully corrected files won't be accepted, there are also legal reasons. The lawyer of my company explained it to me (not related to Panzer Corps, just a similar case), if I would write a scenario briefing and Lordz/Slitherine would take it without a lot of declarations on my part that I give them full rights blabla etc. I could demand funny things like the briefing being removed later or getting paid and so on. Sometimes I really despair about such things...
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
HardelotA.pzbrf
It is good to see you here in Boulogne, Herr General, we have need of your task force's special abilities once again. Several of our offshore Schnellboote patrols have reported sporadic contact with enemy forces, and we believe they actually came into contact with an Allied raiding party. (...)
-> Minor correction: Schnellboot without "e". Don't make me explain German grammar, but for Germans it is enough that patrols has the plural "s". This is a common translation problem when German words get used in English texts.
HardelotB_decisive.pzbrf + HardelotC_minor.pzbrf + HardelotD_loss.pzbrf
OK
It is good to see you here in Boulogne, Herr General, we have need of your task force's special abilities once again. Several of our offshore Schnellboote patrols have reported sporadic contact with enemy forces, and we believe they actually came into contact with an Allied raiding party. (...)
-> Minor correction: Schnellboot without "e". Don't make me explain German grammar, but for Germans it is enough that patrols has the plural "s". This is a common translation problem when German words get used in English texts.
HardelotB_decisive.pzbrf + HardelotC_minor.pzbrf + HardelotD_loss.pzbrf
OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
MessinaA.pzbrf + B + C + D: OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
Salerno Counter-AttackA.pzbrf
OK
Salerno Counter-AttackB_decisive.pzbrf
(...)
Historically, the German counter-attack against the Salerno beachhead failed to accomplish its goals and was driven back by heavy air attack and Allied naval gunfire .
-> Allied naval gunfire. <- there is a space between gunfire and the . in the original text.
Salerno Counter-AttackC_marginal.pzbrf
-> same issues with the "."
Salerno Counter-AttackD_loss.pzbrf
OK
OK
Salerno Counter-AttackB_decisive.pzbrf
(...)
Historically, the German counter-attack against the Salerno beachhead failed to accomplish its goals and was driven back by heavy air attack and Allied naval gunfire .
-> Allied naval gunfire. <- there is a space between gunfire and the . in the original text.
Salerno Counter-AttackC_marginal.pzbrf
-> same issues with the "."
Salerno Counter-AttackD_loss.pzbrf
OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
Salerno LandingA.pzbrf + Salerno LandingB_decisive.pzbrf + Salerno LandingC_marginal.pzbrf + Salerno LandingD_loss.pzbrf
All OK
All OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
St NazaireA.pzbrf
Note: SE Unit limit for this campaign is 4. Experience limit is set at 425.
-> No error, just want to point out that this info is an excellent idea.
B+C+D:
All OK
Note: SE Unit limit for this campaign is 4. Experience limit is set at 425.
-> No error, just want to point out that this info is an excellent idea.
B+C+D:
All OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
SyracuseA.pzbrf + B + C + D:
All OK
All OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
TarantoA.pzbrf + D:
OK
TarantoB_decisive.pzbrf
Historically, most of the Italian fleet fell into Allied hands, but the Battleship Roma, hit by multiple radio-controlled Fritz X bombs, exploded and sank with a loss of over 60% of her crew .
-> remove the space between crew and .
TarantoC_marginal.pzbrf
-> same, remove the space between crew and .
OK
TarantoB_decisive.pzbrf
Historically, most of the Italian fleet fell into Allied hands, but the Battleship Roma, hit by multiple radio-controlled Fritz X bombs, exploded and sank with a loss of over 60% of her crew .
-> remove the space between crew and .
TarantoC_marginal.pzbrf
-> same, remove the space between crew and .
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
Volturno LineA.pzbrf + B + C + D:
All OK
All OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
While we appreciate the effort, questions of style and word choice is ultimately our decision. If something is blatantly wrong, we of course want to correct it, Material and Materiel, for example. If something only might or maybe seem better it could get a 'don't fix what isn't broken' treatment.
Apologies for the misunderstanding, I should have said all issues above this post have been acknowledged and resolved (one way or another, as in they were either changed or deemed acceptable as-is)
Apologies for the misunderstanding, I should have said all issues above this post have been acknowledged and resolved (one way or another, as in they were either changed or deemed acceptable as-is)
ThvN wrote:You're welcome, although, as is my duty as beta-tester for this wonderful game, I must regrettably inform you of several still uncorrected misstakes I posted in the beginningKerensky wrote:All issues above this post should be corrected. Thanks for your help, keep it coming!
St NazaireA.pzbrf
Original:
March 28th, 1942
Congratulations on your new command, Herr General. I am certain that you will perform your duties and lead your men with the utmost ability. As your Generalfeldmarschall, I will keep you informed of your objectives and share intelligence with you as it becomes available during these briefings. (Might be confusing to non-native speakers, being interpreted as new info becoming available during briefings) Speaking of which, shall we begin your briefing now?
I must say, I was somewhat confused by your transfer orders, but if you truly have arrived here from the Eastern Front, I'm certain that your hand picked veterans will serve you well. If you began this campaign with a force imported from Grand Campaign '41, you will only be able to import 8 of these units AND your prestige will be reset. The remaining units are considered to have stayed (stayed behind) on the Eastern Front.
Now then, as the war in the East and Afrika continues, not all has been quiet here in the West. In the past, numerous probing attacks from British commandos (British Commandos or Allied commandos?) have caused some irritating damage. While this is of no great concern, it is obvious that these attacks will only continue to grow in size and scope, and so they must be addressed! This is where you come in.
As the commanding officer of our secret task force, it falls upon you to respond to and eliminate the threat posed by these commando raids. As the war continuing on other fronts is already placing heavy demand on Germany's industry, however, the supply of equipment you may receive may... be of second hand (Not wrong, but I propose second-rate or second class)nature. Even so, you must strive to do your best with the cards you've been dealt!
Your first task is to defend the French port of St. Nazaire. Double agents have leaked intelligence pointing to a major enemy operation aimed at St. Nazaire, and we need you to stop it. Your objective is (briefing mentions two objectives) to protect the Normandie Dock and all docked U-boats within the harbor.
Good luck, Herr General. I trust you will fulfill your duty brilliantly!
Note: SE Unit limit for this campaign is 4. Experience limit is set at 425.
Corrected text:
March 28th, 1942
Congratulations on your new command, Herr General. I am certain that you will perform your duties and lead your men to the utmost of your ability. As your Generalfeldmarschall, I will keep you informed of your objectives and share intelligence with you through these briefings as it becomes available. Speaking of which, shall we begin your briefing now?
I must say, I was somewhat confused by your transfer orders, but if you truly have arrived here from the Eastern Front, I'm certain that your hand picked veterans will serve you well. If you began this campaign with a force imported from Grand Campaign '41, you will only be able to import 8 of these units AND your prestige will be reset. The remaining units are considered to have stayed behind on the Eastern Front.
Now then, as the war in the East and Afrika continues, not all has been quiet here in the West. In the past, numerous probing attacks from Allied commandos have caused some irritating damage. While this is of no great concern, it is obvious that these attacks will only continue to grow in size and scope, and so they must be addressed! This is where you come in.
As the commanding officer of our secret task force, it falls upon you to respond to and eliminate the threat posed by these commando raids. As the ongoing war on other fronts is already placing heavy demand on Germany's industry, however, the supply of equipment you may receive may... be of second class nature. Even so, you must strive to do your best with the cards you've been dealt!
Your first task is to defend the French port of St. Nazaire. Double agents have leaked intelligence pointing to a major enemy operation aimed at St. Nazaire, and we need you to stop it. Your objectives are to protect the Normandie Dock and all docked U-boats within the harbor.
Good luck, Herr General. I trust you will fulfill your duty brilliantly!
Note: SE Unit limit for this campaign is 4. Experience limit is set at 425.
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
Again, while we appreciate the effort, I would say there is no need to let us know when something is okay. We did our own proofreading and all briefings passed at least a preliminary review. We would sincerely hope that almost every briefing is already okay.
Longasc wrote:Volturno LineA.pzbrf + B + C + D:
All OK
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
My apologies, I was confused by the fact that St NazaireC_marginal.pzbrf still had 'St. Naizare' misspelled, although you had clearly stated that it should have been corrected. The filenames themselves were corrected, so I assumed the worst and just fleeced through all the files again and reposted everything I could find, to be on the safe side. Could it be that I have the wrong briefing files, since Longasc did not report it?Kerensky wrote:While we appreciate the effort, questions of style and word choice is ultimately our decision. If something is blatantly wrong, we of course want to correct it, Material and Materiel, for example. If something only might or maybe seem better it could get a 'don't fix what isn't broken' treatment.
Apologies for the misunderstanding, I should have said all issues above this post have been acknowledged and resolved (one way or another, as in they were either changed or deemed acceptable as-is)
If so, I'll reinstall the beta2 again, to be sure. I am used to present everything I can find and let clients decide on the final wording, sometimes supplying several versions with different styles if so requested. So my philosophy is essentially the same as yours (the client decides), but my presentation here is rather lacking, I have to agree, sorry for that. But thanks for the feedback, I really helps knowing what is expected and wanted, and what not.
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
There was a more serious issue with the St Nazaire scenario. Changing it to the correct spelling actually broke some mechanics (the core reset mechanic was directly linked to the scenario name, so we did change it, but had to change it back to preserve this feature)
Apologies for the confusion.
Apologies for the confusion.
Re: Text Errors DLC 42/43 West
Salerno Landing:
Salerno LandingA.pzbrf
Original:
'If this proves too difficult, however, you should at least hold on to 4 Victory Hexes, as any less will be insufficient to serve as a staging ground for eventual counter attack.'
Two different ways which are a bit better:
If this proves too difficult, however, you should at least hold on to 4 Victory Hexes, as any less will be insufficient to serve as a staging ground for an eventual counter attack.
OR
If this proves too difficult, however, you should at least hold on to 4 Victory Hexes, as any less will be insufficient to serve as a staging ground for eventual counter attacks.
Salerno LandingB_decisive.pzbrf
Original:
Excellent, now we have the Allies trapped exactly where we want them! Their landings are Salerno have been bottled up nicely and now is the time to strike back. Order your forces forward, Herr General. Your Panzers will never get a better opportunity to drive our enemy back into the sea!
Corrected:
Excellent, now we have the Allies trapped exactly where we want them! Their landings at Salerno have been bottled up nicely and now is the time to strike back. Order your forces forward, Herr General. Your Panzers will never get a better opportunity to drive our enemy back into the sea!
Salerno LandingC_marginal.pzbrf
Original:
Although the Americans managed to make some gains inland, you did a respectable job preventing a complete break out from the beaches. Their landings are Salerno have been bottled well enough and now is the time to strike back. Order your forces forward, Herr General. Your Panzers will never get a better opportunity to drive our enemy back into the sea!
Corrected:
Although the Americans managed to make some gains inland, you did a respectable job preventing a complete break out from the beaches. Their landings at Salerno have been bottled well enough and now is the time to strike back. Order your forces forward, Herr General. Your Panzers will never get a better opportunity to drive our enemy back into the sea!
Salerno LandingA.pzbrf
Original:
'If this proves too difficult, however, you should at least hold on to 4 Victory Hexes, as any less will be insufficient to serve as a staging ground for eventual counter attack.'
Two different ways which are a bit better:
If this proves too difficult, however, you should at least hold on to 4 Victory Hexes, as any less will be insufficient to serve as a staging ground for an eventual counter attack.
OR
If this proves too difficult, however, you should at least hold on to 4 Victory Hexes, as any less will be insufficient to serve as a staging ground for eventual counter attacks.
Salerno LandingB_decisive.pzbrf
Original:
Excellent, now we have the Allies trapped exactly where we want them! Their landings are Salerno have been bottled up nicely and now is the time to strike back. Order your forces forward, Herr General. Your Panzers will never get a better opportunity to drive our enemy back into the sea!
Corrected:
Excellent, now we have the Allies trapped exactly where we want them! Their landings at Salerno have been bottled up nicely and now is the time to strike back. Order your forces forward, Herr General. Your Panzers will never get a better opportunity to drive our enemy back into the sea!
Salerno LandingC_marginal.pzbrf
Original:
Although the Americans managed to make some gains inland, you did a respectable job preventing a complete break out from the beaches. Their landings are Salerno have been bottled well enough and now is the time to strike back. Order your forces forward, Herr General. Your Panzers will never get a better opportunity to drive our enemy back into the sea!
Corrected:
Although the Americans managed to make some gains inland, you did a respectable job preventing a complete break out from the beaches. Their landings at Salerno have been bottled well enough and now is the time to strike back. Order your forces forward, Herr General. Your Panzers will never get a better opportunity to drive our enemy back into the sea!