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Minor error corrections (spelling, grammar etc)
Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 3:38 pm
by the_iron_duke
I thought I'd submit the minor errors in spelling, grammar and suchlike that I come across occasionally in the game.
Re: Minor error corrections (spelling, grammar etc)
Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 3:40 pm
by the_iron_duke
- in the Medieval Cypriot D.A.G. army list page 'Medieval' is spelt 'Medeival'
- on the battlefield (but not list) Thessalian is misspelt as 'Thessaliian'
- in the Seleucid Successor army lists there are double spaces erroneously used for the Thracian and Persian heavy cavalry units
- Western Hunnic: Attila is spelt as Atilla in the description
- there are minor letter-spacing errors in the D.A.G. list descriptions for Ayyubid Egyptian, Georgian, Later Polish, Khwarazmian, Abassid Arab, Later Ottoman Turkish, Classical Indian, Scots in Britain, Later Scots Isles, Medieval Burgundian, Swiss, Spartacus slave revolt.
- Syrian States: includes an extra full stop, 'winning' is misspelt as spelt 'wining' and 'Dubaisto' should have a space in it
- Later Seleucid: says "the last Seleucid000 Princes". Not a word, plus Princes probably better de-capitalised.
- Later Granadine: 'for' is misspelt as 'fro'
- Later Jewish: 'HE' should be 'He', 'ofNabataean' should have a space
- Cilician Armenian: the capital 'sis' not capitalised (pun not intended but unavoidable)
- Jewish Revolt: 'the great revolt' should be capitalised and 'Judae' should be 'Judea' (or Judaea)
- Later Bulgarian has superfluous random apostrophe
- Later Hungarian: comma before 'however' should be full stop and new sentence
- hyphenations: in Palmyran, 'semi independent' should be hyphenated as should 'twenty five' in Pontic, 'two/single handed' in Classical Indian and the linked dates in Later Serbian
- Ordonnance Burgundian: after 'ambitions:' there should only be one space and 'To' shouldn't be capitalised
- minor point but in the Early German description, second sentence, the comma should be after 'warfare' not 'established'
- I had noted that Macedonian 'Companions' were spelt 'Companians', although I can no longer see this and it may have been fixed in the last update
Yours pedantically.
Re: Minor error corrections (spelling, grammar etc)
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 1:13 pm
by the_iron_duke
- Later Seleucid (post-166) has AD and BC wrong way round showing 166 AD - 63 BC whereas it should be 166 BC - 63 AD
- the Ghaznavid and Ghaznavid (later) armies share the same dates. Judging by the dates mentioned in the description the given dates are supposed to be split in two periods.
- Numidian (Juba II) has the dates as 3 AD - 6 BC so time is moving in reverse
- Early Armenian (Khosrov I) has the dates as 226 BC - 228 BC so time is moving in reverse
- Later Ottoman and Later Ottoman (later) armies 'janisarry handgunners' should have two ss's and one r like it's spelt with the other janissary units
- Santa Hermandad Nueva Castilian: Swiss mercenariers -> mercenaries?
Re: Minor error corrections (spelling, grammar etc)
Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 4:07 pm
by Rodia
Battlepack expansion - Las Navas de Tolosa scenario.
I totally love "King Snacho", or "Gonzarlo", lmao "King Snacho"
The scenario is full of spelling and spacing bugs, seems like Slithy took it from the internet and published it and in the middle they did nothing.