Slitherine

A liitle nit pick but for all of the greek rivers, you should either use for exemple "Axios River" or "Axios Potamos", but not "Axios Potamos River" as on the map. Potamos already means River.

EDIT : hey, I am a bunker now !

In the Minsk briefing, in the fourth paragraph: where it says, "...to secure city of Minsk..." should be "to secure the city of Minsk."

Zhitomir briefing: "you're your" - not even sure what this is intended to say.

Reminding myself about this:

On Vyazma, it should be "hard-earned", very minor nitpick.

On the Smolensk briefing, in the third paragraph, "counter-attack" should be one word.

Everything ABOVE this post should be addressed in the upcoming update. Thanks again for all your reports!

Longasc wrote:Minsk 41:

Unit "Karl-Gerat" -> "Karl-Gerät".
There is an "ä" in Gerät (German for device/machine)
The same applies for the Karl-Gerät in "Barbarossa" in the original campaign.

This is part of the equipment editor, not the map. I'll pass this information along.

dshaw62197 wrote:Metaxas Line post-mission briefing: Where it says, "...the Metaxas line..." should read Metaxas Line.

I dont think this is right.

<p>Congratulations, Herr General! With the Metaxas line impotently left behind you, all of Greece has been laid bare! Although I am sure you are eager to personally occupy Athens and chase the British all the way to their evacuation ships, we have a much more important task for you to prepare for.</p>

Remove 'the' from that? No way.

In the Zhitomir briefing:
1. In the third paragraph, where it says "...a weakened, but sizeable force, ..." should read "... a weakened, but sizeable, force ..."
2. In the fourth paragraph, in the last line, "pincer" should be "pincers."

Remove 'the' from that? No way.

Oops! Sorry Kerensky, my bad, I should have written that differently. The "the" is fine; I meant that the word "line" should be capitalized (proper name). Sorry I wasn't too clear on that.

Alright cool.

Everything above THIS POST has been implemented now.

dshaw62197 wrote:In the Zhitomir briefing:
1. In the third paragraph, where it says "...a weakened, but sizeable force, ..." should read "... a weakened, but sizeable, force ..."
2. In the fourth paragraph, in the last line, "pincer" should be "pincers."

That's ZhurivkaA.pzbrf not Zhitomir.

That was my personal 'key' for knowing which of my three scenarios were the 'Kiev ones' They are Z Z and Z.
Zhitomir, Zhurivka, and Zolotonosha.
When you sort alphabetically, these three maps also happen to line up in their correct playing order as well.

There is an inversion of words:

This should your keep force well away ...

-> This should keep your force well away...

In the Spires of Moscow briefing, second paragraph, "well fortified" should be "well-fortified."

A few briefings in one post.

In the Streets of Moscow post-mission briefing: where it says, "...from the Soviet Far East, surely we cannot..." drop the comma and place a period, starting "Surely we cannot" as a new sentence.

In the Demyansk Pocket briefing:
1. First paragraph: "counter-offensive" should be one word.
2. Second paragraph: "re-located" should be one word.
3. Fifth paragraph: "ground based" should be "ground-based."

In the Demyansk post-mission briefing:
1. First paragraph: "well positioned" should be "well-positioned."
2. Second paragraph: "well deserved" should be "well-deserved."

A pair of briefing text issues:

1. In the Ostrov post-mission briefing: where it says, "... linking up with units of Army Group South in no time..." had me a bit confused. Shouldn't this be Army Group North?

2. In the Novgorod briefing, in the fourth paragraph, "well equipped" should be "well-equipped."

From the Leningrad briefing: in the second paragraph, "counter-attack" should be one word.

In the Novgorod briefing, it mentions linking up with units from army group south..
I think you mean north right??