So, some comments:
Page 7 - Battle Group Formations
"Only the rear rank is allowed to have less bases". This paragraph can easily be read to say that (as an example) and 8-strong BG could be set up with 6 in the front rank and 2 in the rear rank. I don't think this is the intention, and so there should be something about evening the ranks somehow....?
Page 17 - "Simple" & "Difficult" moves. This whole teminology still confuses me. I suspect it may be because "Simple" moves are NOT the opposite of "Difficult" moves, but its easy to assume that they should be - the definition of "Advances" on page 19 also feels somehow orphaned. Is there a different way of describing - and naming - "Difficult" moves and "Advances" ?
As far as I can work out, the whole "difficult move" thing means that wheeling or moving less than max speed is a CMT for undrilled foot unless they are beyond 6" or with a general - and this is also a CMT for anyone doing any sort of 2nd move at all. Is this right? Maybe its just easier to have this as a cause for a CMT rather than clogging up the move table with it? Or throw it in the good old "2nd move" section - which should be here!
Page 28 - Troops who may charge without orders. "Shock Troops" sounds cool, but basically it means lancers, impact foot offensive spears, and pikemen. Is it really needed as a classification? Or should the list be spelt out here again for clarity?
Page 32 - last bullet before diagram, middle of page. "It then completes its full move" - does this mean the wheel is part of the measurement of the VMD, or not? Could be read either way.
Page 34 - Conforming to enemy in combat. Opening paragraph - does the BG as a whole shift around to conform, or do only the bases already in combat shift and line up. Again I think I know the intent, but the language is unclear.
Page 46 - the way you work out the whole "1 dice per 3" malarkey still hasn't been explained by now - it probably should be, and this is as good a point in the rules as any - its pretty key and has caused clearly confusion before.
Page 52 - Heavy Weapon "also cancels out better armour" - is this as well as its own POA balancing the "better armour" POA, or in addition? The repetition in the "Better armour" POA is probably counter-productive .


